Stuff that needs worked on!

[Cless]

Seems we're having trouble attracting new translators to this. The project, of course, is in no way canned (I really hate having to reaffirm this after periods of inactivity). We're just stalled, as is the usual course.

Little has happened following the 4/28 textfile update, aside from the brief discussion here. Nothing notable has happened at all "behind the scenes."

I dunno if the text file mountain is scaring people away, so this topic will be dedicated to little translation "spots" that get straight to the point... stuff that definitely needs working on, without wading through all the files to find things. Also, to help keep people from feeling overwhelmed, each spot will only have several items max to work on.

I'll still be updating the text files in the sticky accordingly, as time goes on.

So, to begin, let's get started on Leroy's leftovers: equipment descriptions. He had almost completed the entire thing, but there are about 25 Polearm descriptions not yet finished.

Notes:

• Item to which the description belongs is written below the description text.
• Max description length is 2 lines at 40 characters each (40/40).

#WRITE(ptr, $C19AC)
// 107DE8
伝説に登場する幻想の力を秘めた戦斧<LINE>
口伝を書物にまとめた兄弟の名を冠する<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1994)
#WRITE(ptr, $C3C48)
// 107E30
//グリムアクス<END>
Grimm's Axe<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1990)
// 107E40
エクストラプレッシャーの略<LINE>
すでに人のあつかえる重さでは・・・・<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1978)
#WRITE(ptr, $C3C78)
// 107E80
//エクスプレス<END>
E.P.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1974)
// 107E90
巨大な刃の戦斧<LINE>
肉切りの大包丁が由来<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C195C)
#WRITE(ptr, $C3C54)
// 107EB8
//クリーヴァ<END>
Cleaver<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1958)
// 107EC8
巨大な半月の刃を持つ戦斧<LINE>
<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1940)
#WRITE(ptr, $C3C50)
//クレセント<END>
Crescent<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C193C)
// 107EF8
半月形状の斧頭が付いた戦斧<LINE>
<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1924)
#WRITE(ptr, $C3C6C)
//タバール<END>
Tabar<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1920)
// 107F28
簡素で典雅な造りの戦斧<LINE>
厚い装甲でも斬り裂きそうです<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1908)
// 107F60
//ゴシックアクス<END>
Gothic Axe<END>

[Cyllya]

#WRITE(ptr, $C19AC)
// 107DE8
//伝説に登場する幻想の力を秘めた戦斧<LINE>
//口伝を書物にまとめた兄弟の名を冠する<END>
A battle axe with hidden powers.<LINE>
Named after storytelling brothers.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1994)
#WRITE(ptr, $C3C48)
// 107E30
//グリムアクス<END>
Grimm's Axe<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1990)
// 107E40
//エクストラプレッシャーの略<LINE>
//すでに人のあつかえる重さでは・・・・<END>
Shot for Extra Pressure.<LINE>
The weight is almost too much...<END>
//I couldn't understand the second line. I made something up that seemed to fit.

#WRITE(ptr, $C1978)
#WRITE(ptr, $C3C78)
// 107E80
//エクスプレス<END>
E.P.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1974)
// 107E90
//巨大な刃の戦斧<LINE>
//肉切りの大包丁が由来<END>
A battle axe with a giant blade.<LINE>
It's based on the large kitchen knife.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C195C)
#WRITE(ptr, $C3C54)
// 107EB8
//クリーヴァ<END>
Cleaver<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1958)
// 107EC8
//巨大な半月の刃を持つ戦斧<LINE>
A battle axe with a huge blade shaped<LINE>
like a crescent moon.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1940)
#WRITE(ptr, $C3C50)
//クレセント<END>
Crescent<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C193C)
// 107EF8
//半月形状の斧頭が付いた戦斧<LINE>
A battle axe with a crescent-shaped<LINE>
head.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1924)
#WRITE(ptr, $C3C6C)
//タバール<END>
Tabar<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1920)
// 107F28
//簡素で典雅な造りの戦斧<LINE>
//厚い装甲でも斬り裂きそうです<END>
A simple and elegant battle axe.<LINE>
It seems good versus thick armor.<END>
//Not 100% certain of the accuracy of second line.

#WRITE(ptr, $C1908)
// 107F60
//ゴシックアクス<END>
Gothic Axe<END>

The project, of course, is in no way canned (I really hate having to reaffirm this after periods of inactivity).

You'd think people could figure that out given PP's history, but at the same time people have to ask what's going on even when a quick glance at the forum they're asking on would get them pretty up-to-date on what's happening, so I guess not.

Anyway, this topic's a good idea. I felt like helping a little, but I was getting lost in stuff that's done or not done, and I don't feel like putting forth too much energy since I don't like this game much.

[Cless]

Nice. I'm not going to be terribly anal about these descriptions, really. As long as they make sense

You'd think people could figure that out given PP's history, but at the same time people have to ask what's going on even when a quick glance at the forum they're asking on would get them pretty up-to-date on what's happening, so I guess not.

Pretty much. People should be worried if we haven't updated in over a year or something and have seemingly disappeared from the face of the planet. There are plenty of big games from the SNES era that are still awaiting completion. Many of those projects are dormant and on pages that haven't been updated since the 90s or early century...

Anyway, six more polearms...

#WRITE(ptr, $C1A54)
// 107C68
神話に登場する狂暴な<LINE>
灰色熊の名を冠する戦斧<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1A3C)
// 107C98
//グリズリー<END>
Grizzly<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1A38)
// 107CA8
半牛半人の怪物が使用した巨大な戦斧<LINE>
その大きさは見る者を圧倒する<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1A20)
// 107CE8
//ミノタウロス<END>
Minotaurus<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1A1C)
// 107CF8
杭打ちハンマー<LINE>
殴られたら・・・・死ねるわ！<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1A04)
// 107D20
//パイルドライバー<END>
Piledriver<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1A00)
// 107D38
刃の交換が可能な両刃の戦斧<LINE>
<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C19E8)
// 107D58
//ダブルブレード<END>
Double Edge<END>
//Thinking about it now, I have no idea why I called it this... I guess it doesn't really matter

#WRITE(ptr, $C19E4)
// 107D68
目標を精密に捕える戦斧<LINE>
敵を爆砕する<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C19CC)
// 107D90
//トマホーク<END>
Tomahawk<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C19C8)
// 107DA0
ゴシゴシこするとキレイになる<LINE>
かつての英雄も使ったとか<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C19B0)
// 107DD8
//デッキブラシ<END>
Deckbrush<END>
//eh, I guess this doesn't completely work as a traditional "polearm" (as I've decided to call Loni's arms), but the literal defintion of polearm is just any weapon with an extra long shaft. It's the only one of his weapons that are like that anyway, I've seen plenty of stranger things in games before.

[Cyllya]

Don't worry about joke weapons not fitting into the item class name. At least not if you can't explain how a harisen counts as a sword. :p As for double edge, if it's all the same, I think it's better to keep the Japanese name since it makes it easier to use FAQs based on the Japanese version and stuff like that. *shrug*

#WRITE(ptr, $C1A54)
// 107C68
//神話に登場する狂暴な<LINE>
//灰色熊の名を冠する戦斧<END>
A battle axe named after a furious<LINE>
legendary grizzly bear.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1A3C)
// 107C98
//グリズリー<END>
Grizzly<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1A38)
// 107CA8
//半牛半人の怪物が使用した巨大な戦斧<LINE>
//その大きさは見る者を圧倒する<END>
A giant axe used by a half-man half-bull<LINE>
monster. The size is overwhelming.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1A20)
// 107CE8
//ミノタウロス<END>
Minotaurus<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1A1C)
// 107CF8
//杭打ちハンマー<LINE>
//殴られたら・・・・死ねるわ！<END>
If you get hit... yer goin' down!
//First line is the name in Japanese.
//Is the second line a reference to something? Is that the girly -wa?

#WRITE(ptr, $C1A04)
// 107D20
//パイルドライバー<END>
Piledriver<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1A00)
// 107D38
//刃の交換が可能な両刃の戦斧<LINE>
A double-bladed battle axe.<LINE>
It's possible to switch blades.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C19E8)
// 107D58
//ダブルブレード<END>
Double Edge<END>
//Thinking about it now, I have no idea why I called it this... I guess it doesn't really matter

#WRITE(ptr, $C19E4)
// 107D68
//目標を精密に捕える戦斧<LINE>
//敵を爆砕する<END>
A battle axe that seizes its target.<LINE>
It will blast your enemies.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C19CC)
// 107D90
//トマホーク<END>
Tomahawk<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C19C8)
// 107DA0
//ゴシゴシこするとキレイになる<LINE>
//かつての英雄も使ったとか<END>
Scrub till it's nice and clean.<LINE>
This was used by an ancient hero.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C19B0)
// 107DD8
//デッキブラシ<END>
Deckbrush<END>
//eh, I guess this doesn't completely work as a traditional "polearm" (as I've decided to call Loni's arms), but the literal defintion of polearm is just any weapon with an extra long shaft. It's the only one of his weapons that are like that anyway, I've seen plenty of stranger things in games before.

[Kajitani-Eizan]

#WRITE(ptr, $C1990)
// 107E40
//エクストラプレッシャーの略<LINE>
//すでに人のあつかえる重さでは・・・・<END>
Shot for Extra Pressure.<LINE>
The weight is almost too much...<END>
//I couldn't understand the second line. I made something up that seemed to fit.

i think it's saying something along the lines of, "people already have to deal with so much weight...", the implication being that the extra pressure that the E.P. puts on is enough to overwhelm them, or something. i'm not sure what they mean by weight, exactly... the weight of their armor? gravity in general? loni trying to piledrive them?

what we have down already seems fine, though... dunno if we can really word the idea humorously. unless someone wants to give it a shot

#WRITE(ptr, $C1920)
// 107F28
//簡素で典雅な造りの戦斧<LINE>
//厚い装甲でも斬り裂きそうです<END>
A simple and elegant battle axe.<LINE>
It seems good versus thick armor.<END>
//Not 100% certain of the accuracy of second line.

sounds like it to me. "seems like it would be good even against thick armor."

#WRITE(ptr, $C19C8)
// 107DA0
//ゴシゴシこするとキレイになる<LINE>
//かつての英雄も使ったとか<END>
Scrub till it's nice and clean.<LINE>
This was used by an ancient hero.<END>

lawls, is this the SAME deck brush Stahn used?

#WRITE(ptr, $C1A1C)
// 107CF8
//杭打ちハンマー<LINE>
//殴られたら・・・・死ねるわ！<END>
If you get hit... yer goin' down!
//First line is the name in Japanese.
//Is the second line a reference to something? Is that the girly -wa?

no idea. the wa at the end does sound odd... i'm guessing it's a reference to some magical girl anime or something?

[Cless]

what we have down already seems fine, though... dunno if we can really word the idea humorously. unless someone wants to give it a shot

"it's heavier than yo momma!" i tried lolz

#WRITE(ptr, $C1AFC)
// 107AD0
巨大な戦斧<LINE>
古代竜の涙といわれる<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1AE4)
// 107AF0
//バハムートティア<END>
Bahamut Tear<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1AE0)
// 107B08
火山のマグマから生まれた炎の長槍<LINE>
熱く燃ゆる矛先を持つ<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1AC8)
// 107B40
//イグニス<END>
Ignis<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1AC4)
// 107B50
駆逐者の戦斧<LINE>
かつて蛮族の進撃を撃退した時の逸品<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1AAC)
// 107B80
//ドライビンアクス<END>
Driving Axe<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1AA8)
// 107B98
第三帝国の鍛冶工房で鍛えられた戦斧<LINE>
科学力は世界一！<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1A90)
// 107BD0
//メッサーシュミット<END>
Messerschmitt<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1A8C)
// 107BE8
悲しみという名の騎士が愛用した斧槍<LINE>
ある婦人の名を冠している<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1A74)
// 107C28
//イゾルデ<END>
Isolde<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1A70)
// 107C38
風神の矛槍<LINE>
神速の突きを誇る<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1A58)
// 107C58
//アークウインド<END>
Arc Wind<END>

Getting there. It'll be pretty cool when all the item descriptions are finished. It's nice just turning on the game and seeing so much translated.

[Cyllya]

#WRITE(ptr, $C1AFC)
// 107AD0
//巨大な戦斧<LINE>
//古代竜の涙といわれる<END>
A giant battle axe. It's named for the<LINE>
tears of an ancient dragon.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1AE4)
// 107AF0
//バハムートティア<END>
Bahamut Tear<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1AE0)
// 107B08
//火山のマグマから生まれた炎の長槍<LINE>
//熱く燃ゆる矛先を持つ<END>
A long spear with a burning point.<LINE>
It was born from volcanic magma.<END>
//Not sure about second line (burning part, became the first line)

#WRITE(ptr, $C1AC8)
// 107B40
//イグニス<END>
Ignis<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1AC4)
// 107B50
//駆逐者の戦斧<LINE>
//かつて蛮族の進撃を撃退した時の逸品<END>
An extirminator's battle axe. It was<LINE>
once used to repel attacking barbarians.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1AAC)
// 107B80
//ドライビンアクス<END>
Driving Axe<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1AA8)
// 107B98
//第三帝国の鍛冶工房で鍛えられた戦斧<LINE>
//科学力は世界一！<END>
A battle axe forged by a blacksmith of<LINE>
the Third Reich. Science is supreme!<END>
//Does this make sense? I feel like I'm missing a joke here.

#WRITE(ptr, $C1A90)
// 107BD0
//メッサーシュミット<END>
Messerschmitt<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1A8C)
// 107BE8
//悲しみという名の騎士が愛用した斧槍<LINE>
//ある婦人の名を冠している<END>
A pole axe used by a knight whose name<LINE>
meant sad. Named for the woman he loved.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1A74)
// 107C28
//イゾルデ<END>
Isolde<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1A70)
// 107C38
//風神の矛槍<LINE>
//神速の突きを誇る<END>
A lance used by the god of wind.<LINE>
He would boast of its swift thrusts.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1A58)
// 107C58
//アークウインド<END>
Arc Wind<END>


*must... resist...dirty joke... about... arc wind...*

"it's heavier than yo momma!" i tried lolz

This wins.

[Kajitani-Eizan]

"it's heavier than yo momma!" i tried lolz

that's not what yo momma said last night when i was using my trusty arc wind to--

*explodes in a fiery conflagration of fire, leading to possible injury*

[throughhim413]

So is this thread going to be ongoing with Cless tossing up the bits that need to be translated and people just jumping on them as they come?  That certainly seems like it could be a more effective means to keep things moving, though a bigger pain in the ass for Cless.  I'm still willing to help, I'm just shorter on time these days so I haven't put in any real time digging through the text files.

[Cless]

So is this thread going to be ongoing with Cless tossing up the bits that need to be translated and people just jumping on them as they come? 

That's the idea with this thread. Just spend 20 minutes or less on what's requested to be worked on at the moment and be done with it. No worrying about the whole big list.

I don't mean to discourage the original way we were doing this at all. In fact, I still very much encourage it. This thread was just another idea to get things moving, since updating the scripts  with direction, and updating the website and adding more plugs didn't seem to help much as I anticipated.

I would really like to release the first menu beta soon.

That certainly seems like it could be a more effective means to keep things moving, though a bigger pain in the ass for Cless. 

Well, as long as we do it the way Leroy has (which Cyllya has been doing thus far), with *all* the data from the original file, it's no big deal. Leroy's style has been the easiest to deal with because it's very easy to just copy and paste the chunks back into the script file.


Moving right along... the last of the polearms (7 of them instead of the usual 6)

#WRITE(ptr, $C1BC0)
// 107928
トールの鉄槌<LINE>
必ず命中すると言われる<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1BA8)
// 107950
//ミョルニル<END>
Mjollnir<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1BA4)
// 107960
北方神話に登場する主神の槍<LINE>
とても有名だが・・・・<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1B8C)
// 107990
//グーングニル<END>
Gungnir<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1B88)
// 1079A0
緑の怪しいヤツ<LINE>
かなり怪しいヤツです<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1B70)
// 1079C8
//サンドラの槍<END>
Sandra's Spear<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1B6C)
// 1079D8
南風の名を冠する戦斧<LINE>
<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1B54)
// 1079F0
//ノトス<END>
Notos<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1B50)
// 1079F8
海の獣の死骸から魔女が作った<LINE>
不思議な力を帯びる魔槍<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1B38)
// 107A30
//ゲイボルグ<END>
Gae Bolg<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1B34)
// 107A40
災いの一撃を放つと伝わる伝説の槍<LINE>
<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1B1C)
// 107A68
//ロンギヌス<END>
Longinus<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1B18)
// 107A78
悪魔の牙と恐れられる長柄武器<LINE>
神の敵対者のみ保持を許される<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1B00)
// 107AB8
//ディアボリックファング<END>
Diabolic Fang<END>

[throughhim413]

I forget what the character limit per line was, so if any of these need to be trimmed down, let me know.


#WRITE(ptr, $C1BC0)
// 107928
//トールの鉄槌<LINE>
//必ず命中すると言われる<END>
The Hammer of Thor.<LINE>
Said to always hit its mark.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1BA8)
// 107950
//ミョルニル<END>
Mjollnir<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1BA4)
// 107960
//北方神話に登場する主神の槍<LINE>
//とても有名だが・・・・<END>
A legendary spear of great fame<LINE>
originating from a northern myth...<END>


#WRITE(ptr, $C1B8C)
// 107990
//グーングニル<END>
Gungnir<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1B88)
// 1079A0
//緑の怪しいヤツ<LINE>
//かなり怪しいヤツです<END>
A suspicious green thing.<LINE>
Really a pretty suspicious thing.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1B70)
// 1079C8
//サンドラの槍<END>
Sandra's Spear<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1B6C)
// 1079D8
//南風の名を冠する戦斧<LINE>
A war axe bearing the name of the south wind.<LINE>
<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1B54)
// 1079F0
//ノトス<END>
Notos<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1B50)
// 1079F8
//海の獣の死骸から魔女が作った<LINE>
//不思議な力を帯びる魔槍<END>
Crafted from the bones of a sea monster by a witch.<LINE>
A demonic lance of great power.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1B38)
// 107A30
//ゲイボルグ<END>
Gae Bolg<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1B34)
// 107A40
//災いの一撃を放つと伝わる伝説の槍<LINE>
A demonic spear of legend.<LINE>
Said to call forth calamity with a single blow.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1B1C)
// 107A68
//ロンギヌス<END>
Longinus<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1B18)
// 107A78
//悪魔の牙と恐れられる長柄武器<LINE>
//神の敵対者のみ保持を許される<END>
A pole-arm fearfully called the Devil's Fang.<LINE>
Still exudes the anger of one who stood against God.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1B00)
// 107AB8
//ディアボリックファング<END>
Diabolic Fang<END>

[Cless]

I forget what the character limit per line was, so if any of these need to be trimmed down, let me know.

Some of them were overlimit. I modified them a bit. This is how I inserted them.

#WRITE(ptr, $C1B88)
// 1079A0
//緑の怪しいヤツ<LINE>
//かなり怪しいヤツです<END>
A suspicious green thing...<LINE>
A really, REALLY suspicious green thing.<END>
//thought this sounded a bit more dramatic. It almost kinda sounds funny (in a humorous kinda tone, not a negative one)

#WRITE(ptr, $C1B70)
// 1079C8
//サンドラの槍<END>
Sandra's Spear<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1B6C)
// 1079D8
//南風の名を冠する戦斧<LINE>
A war axe bearing the name of <LINE>
the south wind.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1B54)
// 1079F0
//ノトス<END>
Notos<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1B50)
// 1079F8
//海の獣の死骸から魔女が作った<LINE>
//不思議な力を帯びる魔槍<END>
//Crafted from the bones of a sea monster by a witch.<LINE>
Crafted from the bones of a sea monster.<LINE>
A demonic lance of great power.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1B38)
// 107A30
//ゲイボルグ<END>
Gae Bolg<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1B34)
// 107A40
//災いの一撃を放つと伝わる伝説の槍<LINE>
A demonic spear of legend. Said to call<LINE>
forth calamity with a single blow.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1B1C)
// 107A68
//ロンギヌス<END>
Longinus<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1B18)
// 107A78
//悪魔の牙と恐れられる長柄武器<LINE>
//神の敵対者のみ保持を許される<END>
A polearm with a fearful name. Exudes<LINE>
the anger of one who stood against God.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C1B00)
// 107AB8
//ディアボリックファング<END>
Diabolic Fang<END>


I did quite a bit of work on the titles last night. They really didn't seem THAT spoilerific to me, aside from the one that reveals Judas' obvious true identity... not entirely sure I want to put them in this topic though.

That said, the item descriptions are practically finished! All that's left are a few that may need revisions. But I'm going to focus on translations in this thread, and maybe start a similar one that's more about editing some rough translations and such.


Moving along, there are a still a couple of strategy menu items which are not translated.

#WRITE(ptr, $B802C)
// 1006D8
気持ちをふるい立たせる一言。<LINE>
一人のときでもまあオッケー。<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $B8028)
// 100718
//よし、いくぜ！<END>
Let's go!<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $B8024)
// 100728
無口な男を演出するのもまた一興。<LINE>
一興程度にとどめておきなさい。<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $B8020)
// 100768
//・・・・・<END>
.....<END>

EDIT: adding one more little thing related to the strategy menu:

#WRITE(ptr, $B8070)
// 100778
戦闘開始時には中央の作戦が設定されます。<LINE>
また、カスタムした作戦にはお好みの号令名を<LINE>
つけることができます<END>

[throughhim413]

#WRITE(ptr, $B802C)
// 1006D8
//気持ちをふるい立たせる一言。<LINE>
//一人のときでもまあオッケー。<END>
On my mark, stand up and let loose.<LINE>
If you're alone, well that's fine too.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $B8028)
// 100718
//よし、いくぜ！<END>
Let's go!<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $B8024)
// 100728
//無口な男を演出するのもまた一興。<LINE>
//一興程度にとどめておきなさい。<END>
It's hard to take orders when you don't speak.<LINE>
Please say something.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $B8020)
// 100768
//・・・・・<END>
.....<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $B8070)
// 100778
//戦闘開始時には中央の作戦が設定されます。<LINE>
//また、カスタムした作戦にはお好みの号令名を<LINE>
//つけることができます<END>
At the beginning of every battle, the default strategy is in the center.<LINE>
By accessing the Custom section of the Menu, you can change <LINE>
the command names.<END>

^ This seems to be the general instructions for changing the names and organization of the strategies.  The names of the menu sections and which words you want to use to describe strategy names and organization really depend on what you call them elsewhere in the menu.  But you get the general idea.

[Cless]

#WRITE(ptr, $B8070)
// 100778
//戦闘開始時には中央の作戦が設定されます。<LINE>
//また、カスタムした作戦にはお好みの号令名を<LINE>
//つけることができます<END>
At the beginning of every battle, the default strategy is in the center.<LINE>
By accessing the Custom section of the Menu, you can change <LINE>
the command names.<END>

^ This seems to be the general instructions for changing the names and organization of the strategies.  The names of the menu sections and which words you want to use to describe strategy names and organization really depend on what you call them elsewhere in the menu.  But you get the general idea.

I'm not so sure of the accuracy of the second line.

The message appears when the cursor as the top of the screen. Screenshot of the strategy menu:



It seems that the "Let's go!", "Charge!" and all that are just labels, and that you need to customize the strategy yourself, I guess to match up with the label's wording (there's nothing preset)

There doesn't seem to be anything about a renaming option? I recall Symphonia actually have such a function, but I can't do anything like that here... I can only swap labels.

EDIT: Perhaps this might work...?

#WRITE(ptr, $B8070)
// 100778
//戦闘開始時には中央の作戦が設定されます。<LINE>
//また、カスタムした作戦にはお好みの号令名を<LINE>
///つけることができます<END>
The strategy in the center is the default<LINE>
at the start of every battle.<LINE>
You can also assign a name which you feel<LINE>
best fits your customized strategy.<END>

[Kiko]

Yeah, Team Destiny isn't too hot on letting you rename or name set strategies. You can't do that with Rebirth (labels), you can't do it in Destiny-R (no extra slots) and yeah, can't do that here. Sure is annoying.

Oddly enough they removed it in US Abyss, wierdo Hometek =P

[throughhim413]

Cless, what you put there is actually a lot closer to what it actually says now that I have the context.  I wasn't sure how the system worked, so that's why mine was vague and off-target.  So yeah, just translate that second line like you did.