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highfly
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« on: January 07, 2007, 04:42:51 AM »

Well I decided to throw in some suggestions for food descriptions.
Hopefully they'll be of some use.
Note that I'm not that great in japanese and english isn't my native language.

#WRITE(ptr, $C7CF4)
// 10F990
// すっぱい匂いがする・・・・<LINE>
// スープもまっかっかになっちゃったぞ・・・・<LINE>
<END>
A sour odour is in the air...<LINE>
And the soup is very hot...<LINE>
<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7CF0)
// 10F9D0
// 寒い夜、ボルシチで体をあたためませんか?<LINE>
// もちろん、栄養も豊富な煮込みです<END>
Warm yourself with borscht on a cold night?<LINE>
Naturally the stew contains plenty of nutrition.<END>

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Borscht

I guess they're cooking some hot borscht.


#WRITE(ptr, $C8838)
// 10EF60
// 肉、シーフード、野菜の織り成す交響曲<LINE>
// 今日のあなたは、<LINE>
// どんなメロディを奏でますか?<END>
An interweaved symphony of meat, seafood and vegetables.<LINE>
What kind of melody will<LINE>
you play tonight?<END>

Gorgeus salad has one weird description. Smiley


#WRITE(ptr, $C87A4)
// 10EFD0
// おしい・・・・何かが違う・・・・<LINE>
// それが何であるかは、料理の神の味噌汁<END>
That's weird...something is different...<LINE>
That is why Miso Soup is the god of cuisine.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C87A0)
// 10F010
// さまざまな具を、じっくり煮込んで<LINE>
// うまさを熟成!<LINE>
// 当然ながら、みそは必須<END>
When various ingredients are carefully<LINE>
boiled together it will ripen well.<LINE>
Naturally Miso is required for it.<END>

Okay the description for Miso Stew/Miso Soup was a bit hard for me and the result isn't too great.
Maybe someone else can figure out a better translation?


#WRITE(ptr, $C870C)
// 10F068
// ニガイ! からい! しょっぱい!<LINE>
// 栄養はあるかどうかはわからないが、<LINE>
// 本当にこれでいいのか?<END>
Bitter! Salty! Stingy!<LINE>
Not sure if this has any nutrition or not.<LINE>
Are you sure this is fine?<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C8708)
// 10F0C8
// 気力のための飲み物!<LINE>
// 体力のための飲み物!<LINE>
// 全身にしみわたるエナジー!<END>
A drink of vitality!<LINE>
A drink of pure strength!<LINE>
Energy spreads through your body!<END>

Energy Drinks description.

Tried to do Fruit Sandwich and The Sea Spirit's Gift also but they ended up sounding really silly.
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« Reply #1 on: January 08, 2007, 12:01:15 PM »

A few more food descriptions.

#WRITE(ptr, $C84A8)
// 10F290
// カラフルなフルーツジュース<LINE>
// しぼりたてを冷やしてどうぞ<END>
Colorful Fruit Juice.<LINE>
Please mix with cold water.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C82E0)
// 10F448
// やわらかく甘いキャベツで<LINE>
// ひき肉を巻いてジューシーに仕上げました<LINE>
// OH! ロール・ミー!<END>
Gently roll the cabbage around the<LINE>
ground beef to get a juicy result.<LINE>
Oh! Roll Me!<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7E24)
// 10F880
すっぱい匂いがする・・・・<LINE>
スープもまっかっかになっちゃったぞ・・・・<LINE>
何が良くなかったの?<END>
A sour odour is in the air...<LINE>
And the soup is very hot...<LINE>
Did it turn out okay?<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7E20)
// 10F8D8
// 見た目も香りも食欲をそそる赤いスープ<LINE>
// うーん、あったまるよ・・・・<END>
The appearance and the smell of the red soup arouses appetite.<LINE>
Mmmm, warm...<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7D88)
// 10F928
// 愛情を込めてにぎりましょう<LINE>
// 心を込めてにぎりましょう<LINE>
// 味の深みが違います・・・・これホント!<END>
Let's pour love in to the rice balls.<LINE>
Let's make them wholeheartedly.<LINE>
That will make a difference in their taste...and it's true!<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7A90)
// 10FC68
// これを食する時、誰もが<LINE>
// ふと、幼い頃に想いをはせる・・・・<LINE>
// ひとときのノスタルジーを演出する食べ物<END>
When eating this anyones thoughts will be<LINE>
suddenly transported to their childhood.<LINE>
A food for nostalgic times.<END>
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« Reply #2 on: January 09, 2007, 01:55:30 PM »

The limit's 40/40/25 (115 chars total) for equipment execpt accessories (basically, anything that can be slotted) Otherwise you get 40 on all 3 lines. The line and string end breaks aren't part of the visible string so they don't count.
Does the 40/40/40 limit apply to the recipe/food descriptions as well?
If it does then I'll have to shorten some of my translations.

And here's a few more suggestions.

#WRITE(ptr, $C7700)
// 110070
// 米が主役だ! 炒めろ! 炒めろ!<LINE>
// トマトソースは情熱の赤!<LINE>
// ファイヤー!!!<END>
Rice is important! Fry! Fry!<LINE>
Tomato sauce has crimson passion!<LINE>
Fire!!!<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7670)
// 1100C0
//パエリア<END>
Paella<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C75D4)
#WRITE(ptr, $C7704)
#WRITE(ptr, $C81B4)
// 110198
// 料理において、より高みを目指すならば<LINE>
// もう一度レシピを検討するべきである<LINE>
// 料理の道は、遠く果てしない・・・・<END>
In cooking it's always a good idea to<LINE>
look at the recipe once more.<LINE>
The road of cookery is everlasting...<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C75D0)
// 110200
// たまねぎ風味で炒めたライスを<LINE>
// トロリとクリーミィな卵焼きで包んだ料理。<LINE>
// くずしてしまうのがもったいないくらい<END>
Stirred rice is wrapped inside an omelet<LINE>
with onion to give some flavor.<LINE>
The end result is too good to be true.<END>

^ Here I think the phrase 'torori to kuriimi na tamagoyaki' means a pasty and creamy omelet but that makes the description a bit too long so I shortened it.

#WRITE(ptr, $C7540)
// 110270
//オムライス<END>
Rice Omelet<END>

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« Reply #3 on: January 10, 2007, 09:37:21 AM »

#WRITE(ptr, $C7CF4)
// 10F990
// すっぱい匂いがする・・・・<LINE>
// スープもまっかっかになっちゃったぞ・・・・<LINE>
<END>
A sour odour is in the air...<LINE>
And the soup is very hot...<LINE>
<END>
^ How about something like:

The smell of soup is in the air<LINE>
But don't burn your tongue , it's hot...<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7CF0)
// 10F9D0
// 寒い夜、ボルシチで体をあたためませんか?<LINE>
// もちろん、栄養も豊富な煮込みです<END>
Warm yourself with borscht on a cold night?<LINE>
Naturally the stew contains plenty of nutrition.<END>

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Borscht

I guess they're cooking some hot borscht.

^
Why not warm up with some hot borscht on<LINE>
a cold night? Delicious and Nutritious.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C8838)
// 10EF60
// 肉、シーフード、野菜の織り成す交響曲<LINE>
// 今日のあなたは、<LINE>
// どんなメロディを奏でますか?<END>
An interweaved symphony of meat, seafood and vegetables.<LINE>
What kind of melody will<LINE>
you play tonight?<END>

Gorgeus salad has one weird description. Smiley
^ Haha, you did a great job with that one.  One thing I might suggest is changing 'interweaved' to interwoven. 

#WRITE(ptr, $C87A4)
// 10EFD0
// おしい・・・・何かが違う・・・・<LINE>
// それが何であるかは、料理の神の味噌汁<END>
That's weird...something is different...<LINE>
That is why Miso Soup is the god of cuisine.<END>

^ For the first line, I think it's more like 'So close... but something is wrong (or off)...'  So maybe like...

So close... yet something is off...<LINE>
This subtle flavor, Miso Soup, truly<LINE>
the god of cuisine.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C87A0)
// 10F010
// さまざまな具を、じっくり煮込んで<LINE>
// うまさを熟成!<LINE>
// 当然ながら、みそは必須<END>
When various ingredients are carefully<LINE>
boiled together it will ripen well.<LINE>
Naturally Miso is required for it.<END>

Okay the description for Miso Stew/Miso Soup was a bit hard for me and the result isn't too great.
Maybe someone else can figure out a better translation?
^
Just the right ingredients are selected<LINE>
and stewed together just the right way!<LINE>
Obviously, it all starts with Miso.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C870C)
// 10F068
// ニガイ! からい! しょっぱい!<LINE>
// 栄養はあるかどうかはわからないが、<LINE>
// 本当にこれでいいのか?<END>
Bitter! Salty! Stingy!<LINE>
Not sure if this has any nutrition or not.<LINE>
Are you sure this is fine?<END>
^
Bitter! Spicy! Salty!<LINE>
Does this have any nutritional value?<LINE>
Is it really okay for us to eat?<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C8708)
// 10F0C8
// 気力のための飲み物!<LINE>
// 体力のための飲み物!<LINE>
// 全身にしみわたるエナジー!<END>
A drink of vitality!<LINE>
A drink of pure strength!<LINE>
Energy spreads through your body!<END>

Energy Drinks description.

Tried to do Fruit Sandwich and The Sea Spirit's Gift also but they ended up sounding really silly.
^ That one looks good.

I hope you don't mind me going in and suggesting all of this stuff for what you did.  These are all just suggestions on how your stuff might be improved, you still did very well with them, especially considering that English isn't your first language.  Keep up the good work!

EDIT:  By the way, I'm planning on looking through the rest of the recipes that have been done here and then finishing them off.
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« Reply #4 on: January 10, 2007, 10:10:59 AM »

I'd get a good laugh if we could fit "♪ I love the fishes cause they're so delicious! ♪" somewhere into one of the recipes. Or "O'boises are oboisterous!" though I'm probably the only one old enough to remember that.
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« Reply #5 on: January 10, 2007, 10:30:40 AM »

A few more food descriptions.

#WRITE(ptr, $C84A8)
// 10F290
// カラフルなフルーツジュース<LINE>
// しぼりたてを冷やしてどうぞ<END>
Colorful Fruit Juice.<LINE>
Please mix with cold water.<END>
^ The second line says something more like 'Squeezed and chilled. Drink up.'  So the whole thing might be better as:
Colorful Fruit Juice, fresh squeezed<LINE>
and chilled to perfection. Drink up!<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C82E0)
// 10F448
// やわらかく甘いキャベツで<LINE>
// ひき肉を巻いてジューシーに仕上げました<LINE>
// OH! ロール・ミー!<END>
Gently roll the cabbage around the<LINE>
ground beef to get a juicy result.<LINE>
Oh! Roll Me!<END>
^ That one is right.  Oh! Roll Me! *Laughs at Japan*

#WRITE(ptr, $C7E24)
// 10F880
すっぱい匂いがする・・・・<LINE>
スープもまっかっかになっちゃったぞ・・・・<LINE>
何が良くなかったの?<END>
^
The smell of soup is in the air...<LINE>
But don't burn your tongue , it's hot...
Did something go wrong?<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7E20)
// 10F8D8
// 見た目も香りも食欲をそそる赤いスープ<LINE>
// うーん、あったまるよ・・・・<END>
The appearance and the smell of the red soup arouses appetite.<LINE>
Mmmm, warm...<END>
Looks and smells so good it's making you<LINE>
hungry. Mmmm, so warm...<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7D88)
// 10F928
// 愛情を込めてにぎりましょう<LINE>
// 心を込めてにぎりましょう<LINE>
// 味の深みが違います・・・・これホント!<END>
Let's pour love in to the rice balls.<LINE>
Let's make them wholeheartedly.<LINE>
That will make a difference in their taste...and it's true!<END>
^ Good

#WRITE(ptr, $C7A90)
// 10FC68
// これを食する時、誰もが<LINE>
// ふと、幼い頃に想いをはせる・・・・<LINE>
// ひとときのノスタルジーを演出する食べ物<END>
When eating this anyones thoughts will be<LINE>
suddenly transported to their childhood.<LINE>
A food for nostalgic times.<END>
^ That one is good too.

EDIT:   And your last few sound good as well.  I'll see what else there is to be done in the recipe area.
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« Reply #6 on: January 10, 2007, 11:32:49 AM »

I'm just going to do a big post compiling my suggestions and highfly's stuff.  Otherwise I have a hard time telling what goes where.

#WRITE(ptr, $C8838)
// 10EF60
//肉、シーフード、野菜の織り成す交響曲<LINE>
//今日のあなたは、<LINE>
//どんなメロディを奏でますか?<END>
A symphony of meat, seafood, and<LINE>
vegetables. What sort of melody will you<LINE
play today?<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C87A8)
// 10EFB8
//ゴージャスサラダ<END>
Gorgeous Salad<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C87A4)
// 10EFD0
//おしい・・・・何かが違う・・・・<LINE>
//それが何であるかは、料理の神の味噌汁<END>
So close... yet something is off...<LINE>
This subtle flavor, Miso Soup, truly<LINE>
the god of cuisine.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C87A0)
// 10F010
//さまざまな具を、じっくり煮込んで<LINE>
//うまさを熟成!<LINE>
//当然ながら、みそは必須<END>
Just the right ingredients are selected<LINE>
and stewed together just the right way!<LINE>
Obviously, it all starts with Miso.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C8710)
// 10F058
//みそおでん<END>
Miso Stew<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C870C)
// 10F068
//ニガイ! からい! しょっぱい!<LINE>
//栄養はあるかどうかはわからないが、<LINE>
//本当にこれでいいのか?<END>
Bitter! Spicy! Salty!<LINE>
Nutritional value!? Is this even safe<LINE>
for us to drink?<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C8708)
// 10F0C8
//気力のための飲み物!<LINE>
//体力のための飲み物!<LINE>
//全身にしみわたるエナジー!<END>
A drink of vitality!<LINE>
A drink of pure strength!<LINE>
Energy spreads through your body!<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C8678)
// 10F110
//栄養ドリンク<END>
Energy Drink<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C8674)
// 10F120
//ふぬう・・・・何かが欠けておる・・・・<LINE>
//サンドの世界は奥深きものなり!<END>
Hmm... Something is missing...<LINE>
Also, is there supposed to be sand in<LINE>
a sandwich?<END>

^ Yeah, I just made that second line up.  But this is for when you fail a recipe, so I think it works.

#WRITE(ptr, $C8670)
// 10F160
//新鮮なフルーツを<LINE>
//ふんわりブレッドで、はさみました<LINE>
//いろどり豊かなサンドイッチ<END>
Fresh fruit places between soft bread,<LINE>
Good and good for you.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C85E0)
// 10F1B0
//フルーツサンド<END>
Fruit Sandwich<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C85D8)
// 10F1C0
//命は、海から生まれたのです・・・・<LINE>
//海の幸を豊富に使った料理<LINE>
//すなわち、命の料理<END>
All life was born from the sea...<LINE>
A dish made of the bounty of the sea.<LINE>
The dish of life itself.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C8548)
// 10F210
//海の精の贈り物<END>
The Sea Spirit's Gift<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C8540)
// 10F220
//カレーにしてマーボー!<LINE>
//そして、マーボーにしてカレー!<LINE>
//まさに、トウバンジャンとスパイスの奇跡!<END>
It's curry made with mabo! And it's mabo<LINE>
made with curry! Oh, the wonder of<LINE>
Chinese spices!<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C84B0)
// 10F280
//マーボーカレー<END>
Mabo Curry<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C84A8)
// 10F290
//カラフルなフルーツジュース<LINE>
//しぼりたてを冷やしてどうぞ<END>
Colorful Fruit Juice, fresh squeezed<LINE>
and chilled to perfection. Drink up!<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C8418)
// 10F2C8
//フルーツジュース<END>
Fruit Juice<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C8414)
// 10F2E0
//味がひらべったく、単調で、深みがない<LINE>
//もうひと工夫必要かも・・・・<END>
The flavor is bland, dull, flat.<LINE>
You'd better start over from scratch...<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C8410)
// 10F320
//煮えたぎるなべ!<LINE>
//ほとばしる肉のうまみ!<LINE>
//ドーンと豪快にいこうぜ!<END>
Boil it in a pot!
The meat's flavor surges forth!
________________________

^ Need some helpe with the last line there.

#WRITE(ptr, $C8380)
// 10F368
//肉鍋<END>
Meat Stew<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C837C)
// 10F370
//太陽のまわりを、エプロンを着けた牛が<LINE>
//回転しながら踊っている・・・・<LINE>
//そんなイメージ? ・・・・あれ???<END>
Sun high in sky, a cow-print apron<LINE>
caught in the wind as you dance...<LINE>
That kind of image? ...Huh???<END>

^ This is meant to be nonsense.

#WRITE(ptr, $C8378)
// 10F3D8
//色と形。香りとやわらかさ・・・・<LINE>
//あなたと私と彼と彼女・・・・<LINE>
//それぞれにある、それぞれのチーズケーキ<END>
Color and shape. Soft and fragrant...<LINE>
You and I, him and her... To each his<LINE>
own, to each Cheesecake.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C82E8)
// 10F438
//チーズケーキ<END>
Cheesecake<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C82E0)
// 10F448
//やわらかく甘いキャベツで<LINE>
//ひき肉を巻いてジューシーに仕上げました<LINE>
//OH! ロール・ミー!<END>
Gently roll the cabbage around the<LINE>
ground beef to get a juicy result.<LINE>
Oh! Roll Me!<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C8250)
// 10F4A0
//ロールキャベツ<END>
Cabbage Rolls<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C8248)
// 10F4B0
プリップリのエビを<LINE>
ピリッピリの味に仕上げた料理<LINE>
チリリとからいよ!<END>

^ I don't know what to do with this description.

#WRITE(ptr, $C81B8)
// 10F4F8
//エビチリ<END>
Chili Prawn<END>

^ Shrimp Chili

#WRITE(ptr, $C81B0)
// 10F508
太目のパスタにトマトベースのソースを<LINE>
たっぷりからめて作りましょう<LINE>
ズルッとひとくち。もちもちのプチプチ<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C8120)
// 10F570
//ナポリタン<END>
Spaghetti<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C811C)
// 10F580
何か、ドロドロしている・・・・<LINE>
見た目がちょっとイケてない・・・・<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C8118)
// 10F5C0
とろける味わい<LINE>
なめらかでまろやかな甘味<LINE>
デザートという名のファンタジー<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C8088)
// 10F608
//スイートパフェ<END>
Sweet Parfait<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C8084)
#WRITE(ptr, $C85DC)
// 10F618
ちょっと生ぐさいぞ・・・・<LINE>
魂の込め方が足りないのか?<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C8080)
// 10F650
魚を煮込んで得られるうまさは<LINE>
二重にも三重にも折り重なる味の織物<LINE>
深みとコクのあるダシを味わうべし<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7FF0)
// 10F6B8
//魚鍋<END>
Fish Stew<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7FEC)
// 10F6C0
あれ?<LINE>
こんな味だったなぁ・・・・?<LINE>
ホイルを奥歯でかみしめながら考える・・・・<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7FE8)
// 10F708
シャケに染み込むバターの風味が最高!<LINE>
互いの味わいを高める味と味<LINE>
ベストパートナーと称えたい<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7F58)
// 10F768
//ホイル焼き<END>
Foil Grill<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7F54)
// 10F778
ふぬう・・・・そなたの料理には、<LINE>
もてなしの心が欠けておる!<LINE>
和の世界は奥深きものなり!<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7F50)
// 10F7D0
刺すがごとく切れ!<LINE>
それ、刺身の極意なり!<LINE>
新鮮な魚をすばやく切るべし<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7EC0)
// 10F818
//お刺身<END>
Sashimi<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7EB8)
// 10F820
選び抜いたお肉を、伝統の方法で<LINE>
焼き上げました。<LINE>
生に近い焼き加減でご賞味下さい<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7E28)
// 10F870
//ステーキ<END>
Steak<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7E24)
// 10F880
すっぱい匂いがする・・・・<LINE>
スープもまっかっかになっちゃったぞ・・・・<LINE>
何が良くなかったの?<END>
The smell of soup is in the air...<LINE>
But don't burn your tongue , it's hot...<LINE>
Did something go wrong?<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7E20)
// 10F8D8
見た目も香りも食欲をそそる赤いスープ<LINE>
うーん、あったまるよ・・・・<END>
Looks and smells so good you're drooling.<LINE>
Delicious red soup. Mmmm, so warm...<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7D90)
// 10F918
//ミネストローネ<END>
Minestrone<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7D88)
// 10F928
//愛情を込めてにぎりましょう<LINE>
//心を込めてにぎりましょう<LINE>
//味の深みが違います・・・・これホント!<END>
Let's pour love in to the rice balls.<LINE>
Pour your heart into them. You can taste<LINE>
the difference... WOW!<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7CF8)
// 10F980
//おにぎり<END>
Rice Ball<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7CF4)
// 10F990
//すっぱい匂いがする・・・・<LINE>
//スープもまっかっかになっちゃったぞ・・・・<LINE>
The smell of soup is in the air...<LINE>
But don't burn your tongue , it's hot...<END>
<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7CF0)
// 10F9D0
//寒い夜、ボルシチで体をあたためませんか?<LINE>
//もちろん、栄養も豊富な煮込みです<END>
Why not warm up with some hot borscht on<LINE>
a cold night? Delicious and Nutritious.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7C60)
// 10FA20
//ボルシチ<END>
Borscht<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7C5C)
// 10FA30
ビチャビチャしている・・・・<LINE>
何か、仕上げに問題があるのか?<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7C58)
// 10FA68
野菜を炒めましょう。あふれるうまみ!<LINE>
そして、米と一緒に煮込みましょう<LINE>
しみこむうまみ<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7BC8)
// 10FAC0
//リゾット<END>
Risotto<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7BC4)
#WRITE(ptr, $C7EBC)
// 10FAD0
野趣あふれるダイナミックな味わい!<LINE>
まさに、未完の大器!<LINE>
おい、未完は良くないだろ!<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7BC0)
// 10FB28
ひき肉をねりかためて焼いた料理<LINE>
自身の肉汁でおいしさアップ!<LINE>
ハンバーグより、少しリッチな気分<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7B30)
// 10FB88
//ミートローフ<END>
Meatloaf<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7B2C)
#WRITE(ptr, $C7D8C)
#WRITE(ptr, $C82E4)
// 10FB98
どことなく味わいが違う・・・・<LINE>
それを個性と呼ぶべきか、<LINE>
はたまた、失敗と呼ぶべきか・・・・<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7B28)
// 10FBF0
新鮮な材料をカラッと揚げて、<LINE>
レモンをしぼってガブッと食うべし<LINE>
口の中にジュワッと広がる味!アチチチチ!<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7A98)
// 10FC58
//からあげ<END>
Deep Fry<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7A90)
// 10FC68
//これを食する時、誰もが<LINE>
//ふと、幼い頃に想いをはせる・・・・<LINE>
//ひとときのノスタルジーを演出する食べ物<END>
When eating this anyones thoughts will be<LINE>
suddenly transported to their childhood.<LINE>
A food for nostalgic times.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7A00)
// 10FCC8
//ジャムトースト<END>
Jam Toast<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C79FC)
// 10FCD8
盛り付けをしたらザリザリと音がした・・・・<LINE>
こ・・・・この音の正体って何?<LINE>
何か間違った?<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C79F8)
// 10FD30
魚介類を具に使用したパスタ<LINE>
これをいただく時は、”ペスカトーレ!”と<LINE>
叫んでから食すべし(しかも、腹式呼吸で)<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7968)
// 10FDA0
//ペスカトーレ<END>
Pescatore<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7964)
#WRITE(ptr, $C824C)
#WRITE(ptr, $C8544)
// 10FDB0
何か・・・・危険なニオイがするぜ・・・・<LINE>
こいつは、まさに食材のケンカ料理だ!<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7960)
// 10FDF8
やわやわアチアチのなめらか豆腐。<LINE>
ピリ辛あんとのアクセントが絶妙!<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C78D0)
// 10FE40
//麻婆豆腐<END>
Hot and Sour Soup<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C78CC)
#WRITE(ptr, $C84AC)
// 10FE50
コクが足りない・・・・<LINE>
よけいな雑味が感じられる・・・・<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C78C8)
// 10FE80
スパイスの刺激と、シーフードの持ち味。<LINE>
強烈な夏の日差しを浴びながら<LINE>
波間に漂う幻想に酔う瞬間・・・・<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7838)
// 10FEE8
//海鮮カレー<END>
Seafood Curry<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7834)
#WRITE(ptr, $C883C)
// 10FEF8
ドサドサと盛り付けた微妙なルックス・・・・<LINE>
十人のうち三人くらいは食べてくれるかな?<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7830)
// 10FF48
みずみずしい野菜を<LINE>
オリジナルの盛り付けでどうぞ<LINE>
絵画を描くように、色と形を構成しましょう<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C77A0)
// 10FFA8
//野菜サラダ<END>
Veggie Salad<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C779C)
// 10FFB8
あなたは、料理の海を開拓する冒険家<LINE>
スピリッツがフロンティアすぎて<LINE>
みんな置き去り!<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7798)
// 110010
シロップは宇宙・・・・<LINE>
きらめく星たちのように輝くフルーツ<LINE>
見ているだけで夢色気分!<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7708)
// 110060
//フルーツポンチ<END>
Fruit Punch<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7700)
// 110070
米が主役だ! 炒めろ! 炒めろ!<LINE>
トマトソースは情熱の赤!<LINE>
ファイヤー!!!<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7670)
// 1100C0
//パエリア<END>
Paella<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C766C)
// 1100D0
何をはさんでもサンドイッチ<LINE>
確かに・・・・何をはさんでもサンドイッチ<LINE>
・・・・何もはさまないと何になる?<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7668)
// 110130
外側はパサパサでもビタビタでもダメ<LINE>
あくまで、しっとり!<LINE>
キュウリ抜きとるべからず<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C75D8)
// 110188
//サンドイッチ<END>
Sandwich<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C75D4)
#WRITE(ptr, $C7704)
#WRITE(ptr, $C81B4)
// 110198
料理において、より高みを目指すならば<LINE>
もう一度レシピを検討するべきである<LINE>
料理の道は、遠く果てしない・・・・<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C75D0)
// 110200
たまねぎ風味で炒めたライスを<LINE>
トロリとクリーミィな卵焼きで包んだ料理。<LINE>
くずしてしまうのがもったいないくらい<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7540)
// 110270
//オムライス<END>
Rice Omelet<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C753C)
// 110280
可愛らしい女の子が、髪型はちょんまげで<LINE>
ヒラヒラのドレスを着て踊っている・・・・<LINE>
そんなイメージ? ・・・・あれ???<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7538)
// 1102F0
なめらかなクリームにレモンの香り<LINE>
甘酸っぱく、そして、清らかな味わい<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C74A8)
// 110338
//レモンタルト<END>
Lemon Tart<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C74A4)
// 110348
何か色合いが違うようだ・・・・<LINE>
魔女の格好をして「ヒヒヒ」と言いながら<LINE>
かきまぜるのが似合いそう・・・・<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C74A0)
// 1103A8
しっとりとなめらか、トローリとクリーミィ<LINE>
たくさんの野菜をコトコト煮込みましょう<LINE>
しあわせいっぱいお楽しみ!<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7410)
// 110418
//クリームシチュー<END>
Cream Stew<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C740C)
#WRITE(ptr, $C7A94)
// 110430
シンプルがゆえに奥が深い・・・・<LINE>
工夫や精進はやりすぎという事はない<LINE>
もう少し考えてみよう<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7408)
// 110488
野菜そのままとは全く異なる風味と味わい<LINE>
さらに、その変化を一夜にして完成!<LINE>
これは、食という名の魔術か!?<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7378)
// 1104F0
//一夜漬け<END>
Pickle<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7374)
// 110500
何かがダラーンとはみだしている・・・・<LINE>
これにかじりつくのはチャレンジャーと<LINE>
言わざるをえない・・・・<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7370)
// 110560
はさまるパティの味だけではない!<LINE>
はさむバンズの味が大切なのだ!<LINE>
まさに、バランス・オブ・パワー!<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C72E0)
// 1105C8
//ハンバーガー<END>
Hamburger<END>

I didn't finish.  I have to go out for a few hours, so I'll work on this when I get back.  Don't anyone steal it from me now. Wink
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« Reply #7 on: January 10, 2007, 01:04:37 PM »

I hope you don't mind me going in and suggesting all of this stuff for what you did.  These are all just suggestions on how your stuff might be improved, you still did very well with them, especially considering that English isn't your first language.  Keep up the good work!

EDIT:  By the way, I'm planning on looking through the rest of the recipes that have been done here and then finishing them off.
I took a bit too direct translation approach for these so not all of them sound that great. It's good that there are others checking up on these suggestions so the end result will be easily understandable.

Did only one translation today.

#WRITE(ptr, $C753C)
// 110280
可愛らしい女の子が、髪型はちょんまげで<LINE>
ヒラヒラのドレスを着て踊っている・・・・<LINE>
そんなイメージ? ・・・・あれ???<END>
A lovely girl with a topknot<LINE>
arrives in an angel like dress...<LINE>
That kind of image? ...Huh???<END>

^ I'm not sure what this has to do with lemon tart but maybe someone can explain it to me.

#WRITE(ptr, $C7538)
// 1102F0
// なめらかなクリームにレモンの香り<LINE>
// 甘酸っぱく、そして、清らかな味わい<END>
Smooth cream with a lemon fragrance.<LINE>
Pure flavor of sweet and sour.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C74A8)
// 110338
//レモンタルト<END>
Lemon Tart<END>

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« Reply #8 on: January 22, 2007, 07:07:30 AM »

Well I've been busy with a lot of things these past few weeks so I haven't done any translations.
But hopefully things are less busy for while so I can contribute some translation suggestions daily.

Well here's one again and I'll try to do some more later this evening.

#WRITE(ptr, $C8248)
// 10F4B0
// プリップリのエビを<LINE>
// ピリッピリの味に仕上げた料理<LINE>
// チリリとからいよ!<END>
It isn't enough to fry the prawns you<LINE>
must also add chili to the marinade.<LINE>
But remember that chili is spicy!<END>

^ It doesn't actually say that in the japanese text but I think it's an adequate description if nobody can think of a better one.

#WRITE(ptr, $C81B8)
// 10F4F8
//エビチリ<END>
Chili Prawn<END>

EDIT: One more.

#WRITE(ptr, $C81B0)
// 10F508
// 太目のパスタにトマトベースのソースを<LINE>
// たっぷりからめて作りましょう<LINE>
// ズルッとひとくち。もちもちのプチプチ<END>
Pasta is mainly made out of a tomato<LINE>
based sauce. And it simply melts in<LINE>
your mouth.<END>

^ The last line doesn't translate very well so I had to come up with a substitute.

#WRITE(ptr, $C8120)
// 10F570
//ナポリタン<END>
Spaghetti<END>

EDIT: Tuesday addition...

#WRITE(ptr, $C811C)
// 10F580
// 何か、ドロドロしている・・・・<LINE>
// 見た目がちょっとイケてない・・・・<END>
It looks muddled...<LINE>
What an unpleasant sight...<LINE>

#WRITE(ptr, $C8118)
// 10F5C0
// とろける味わい<LINE>
// なめらかでまろやかな甘味<LINE>
// デザートという名のファンタジー<END>
This dessert has a name from a fantasy.<LINE>
It has a sugary taste and a smooth<LINE>
surface.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C8088)
// 10F608
//スイートパフェ<END>
Sweet Parfait<END>

EDIT: Wednesday addition...

#WRITE(ptr, $C8084)
#WRITE(ptr, $C85DC)
// 10F618
// ちょっと生ぐさいぞ・・・・<LINE>
// 魂の込め方が足りないのか?<END>
It's a bit raw...<LINE>
Isn't it enough to put your soul in to<LINE>
cooking it?<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C8080)
// 10F650
魚を煮込んで得られるうまさは<LINE>
二重にも三重にも折り重なる味の織物<LINE>
深みとコクのあるダシを味わうべし<END>
When making stew out of fish fold the<LINE>
fish in two or three layers. That will<LINE>
give the stew a deep and rich taste.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7FF0)
// 10F6B8
//魚鍋<END>
Fish Stew<END>

EDIT: Thursday addition.

#WRITE(ptr, $C7FEC)
// 10F6C0
// あれ?<LINE>
// こんな味だったなぁ・・・・?<LINE>
// ホイルを奥歯でかみしめながら考える・・・・<END>
Huh?<LINE>
Did it taste like this...?<LINE>
I wonder if foil digests well...<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7FE8)
// 10F708
// シャケに染み込むバターの風味が最高!<LINE>
// 互いの味わいを高める味と味<LINE>
// ベストパートナーと称えたい<END>
When you soak salmon into butter it'll<LINE>
taste great. Both of their flavors<LINE>
enhance each others like best partners.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7F58)
// 10F768
//ホイル焼き<END>
Foil Grill<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7F54)
// 10F778
// ふぬう・・・・そなたの料理には、<LINE>
// もてなしの心が欠けておる!<LINE>
// 和の世界は奥深きものなり!<END>
Hmmm...Your cooking lacks passion!<LINE>
You must obtain harmony with the<LINE>
universe!<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7F50)
// 10F7D0
// 刺すがごとく切れ!<LINE>
// それ、刺身の極意なり!<LINE>
// 新鮮な魚をすばやく切るべし<END>
Thrust as you slice!<LINE>
That is the essence of Sashimi!<LINE>
Slice quickly through the fresh fish.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7EC0)
// 10F818
//お刺身<END>
Sashimi<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7EB8)
// 10F820
// 選び抜いたお肉を、伝統の方法で<LINE>
// 焼き上げました。<LINE>
// 生に近い焼き加減でご賞味下さい<END>
The select pieces of meat are grilled<LINE>
in a traditional manner. And remember<LINE>
to add some seasoning into them.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7E28)
// 10F870
//ステーキ<END>
Steak<END>

EDIT: Friday addition.

#WRITE(ptr, $C7C5C)
// 10FA30
ビチャビチャしている・・・・<LINE>
何か、仕上げに問題があるのか?<END>
It's stirring...<LINE>
Is there something else to do before<LINE>
it is ready?<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7C58)
// 10FA68
// 野菜を炒めましょう。あふれるうまみ!<LINE>
// そして、米と一緒に煮込みましょう<LINE>
// しみこむうまみ<END>
Let's stir-fry some veggies!<LINE>
Mix them with rice and cook them.<LINE>
Let them soak to get a good taste.<LINE>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7BC8)
// 10FAC0
//リゾット<END>
Risotto<END>
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« Reply #9 on: January 27, 2007, 02:50:41 AM »

My previous post got a bit long so I'll make a new post.

If I've calculated correctly there are 10 recipes left after these three and I'll see if I can translate them this weekend.

#WRITE(ptr, $C7BC4)
#WRITE(ptr, $C7EBC)
// 10FAD0
// 野趣あふれるダイナミックな味わい!<LINE>
// まさに、未完の大器!<LINE>
// おい、未完は良くないだろ!<END>
It has dynamic beauty and flavor!<LINE>
Yet it has an atmosphere of failure!<LINE>
Hey, it's not finished yet!<LINE>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7BC0)
// 10FB28
// ひき肉をねりかためて焼いた料理<LINE>
// 自身の肉汁でおいしさアップ!<LINE>
// ハンバーグより、少しリッチな気分<END>
Kneaded ground meat which you personally<LINE>
bake always tastes better!<LINE>
A bit richer taste than in a hamburger.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7B30)
// 10FB88
//ミートローフ<END>
Meatloaf<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7B2C)
#WRITE(ptr, $C7D8C)
#WRITE(ptr, $C82E4)
// 10FB98
// どことなく味わいが違う・・・・<LINE>
// それを個性と呼ぶべきか、<LINE>
// はたまた、失敗と呼ぶべきか・・・・<END>
Somehow it tastes different...<LINE>
Is this what they call a personal touch<LINE>
or a failure...<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7B28)
// 10FBF0
// 新鮮な材料をカラッと揚げて、<LINE>
// レモンをしぼってガブッと食うべし<LINE>
// 口の中にジュワッと広がる味!アチチチチ!<END>
Deep fry fresh ingredients in hot oil.<LINE>
Squeeze a lemon on to them and eat. The<LINE>
taste will spread through your mouth.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7A98)
// 10FC58
//からあげ<END>
Deep Fry<END>

Here's my try for the Meat Stew.

#WRITE(ptr, $C8414)
// 10F2E0
// 味がひらべったく、単調で、深みがない<LINE>
// もうひと工夫必要かも・・・・<END>
The taste is plain and monotone without any depth.<LINE>
One more thing might be neccessary...<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C8410)
// 10F320
// 煮えたぎるなべ!<LINE>
// ほとばしる肉のうまみ!<LINE>
// ドーンと豪快にいこうぜ!<END>
BOIL!<LINE>
The meat wells up!<LINE>
Let's stir some meat!<END>

^ The word Doon (ドーン) puzzles me. It has something to do with meat or stew but I can't figure it out what exactly.

#WRITE(ptr, $C8380)
// 10F368
//肉鍋<END>
Meat Stew<END>

EDIT: Whooops... I just kept watching Ergo Proxy on the weekend so didn't finish the recipes but here's a few new ones.

#WRITE(ptr, $C740C)
#WRITE(ptr, $C7A94)
// 110430
// シンプルがゆえに奥が深い・・・・<LINE>
// 工夫や精進はやりすぎという事はない<LINE>
// もう少し考えてみよう<END>
Simple but profound interior...<LINE>
It's not overkill to concentrate.<LINE>
Let's think this through.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7408)
// 110488
// 野菜そのままとは全く異なる風味と味わい<LINE>
// さらに、その変化を一夜にして完成!<LINE>
// これは、食という名の魔術か!?<END>
A veggie never has completely the same<LINE>
taste. The variation is what makes it<LINE>
perfect! Is this the magic of food?!<END>

^ Had to shorten this a bit but it should suffice.

#WRITE(ptr, $C7378)
// 1104F0
//一夜漬け<END>
Pickle<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7374)
// 110500
// 何かがダラーンとはみだしている・・・・<LINE>
// これにかじりつくのはチャレンジャーと<LINE>
// 言わざるをえない・・・・<END>
There's is something that bothers me...<LINE>
I have to say that it's quite a<LINE>
challenge to eat this...<END>

^ Another unfamiliar word to me Daraan (ダラーン).

#WRITE(ptr, $C7370)
// 110560
// はさまるパティの味だけではない!<LINE>
// はさむバンズの味が大切なのだ!<LINE>
// まさに、バランス・オブ・パワー!<END>
Clearly this isn't pâté!<LINE>
What's in between the buns is important!<LINE>
Surely a Balance of Power!<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C72E0)
// 1105C8
//ハンバーガー<END>
Hamburger<END>

EDIT: Some more.

#WRITE(ptr, $C74A4)
// 110348
// 何か色合いが違うようだ・・・・<LINE>
// 魔女の格好をして「ヒヒヒ」と言いながら<LINE>
// かきまぜるのが似合いそう・・・・<END>
Some aspect of it is different...<LINE>
It stirs like something a laughing<LINE>
witch would make...<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C74A0)
// 1103A8
// しっとりとなめらか、トローリとクリーミィ<LINE>
// たくさんの野菜をコトコト煮込みましょう<LINE>
// しあわせいっぱいお楽しみ!<END>
Soft creamy surface with lots of<LINE>
veggies bubbling on top.<LINE>
Let's happily wait for it to finish!<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7410)
// 110418
//クリームシチュー<END>
Cream Stew<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C79FC)
// 10FCD8
// 盛り付けをしたらザリザリと音がした・・・・<LINE>
// こ・・・・この音の正体って何?<LINE>
// 何か間違った?<END>
The dish is stirring...<LINE>
S...should it stir like this?<LINE>
Did I make a mistake?<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C79F8)
// 10FD30
// 魚介類を具に使用したパスタ<LINE>
// これをいただく時は、”ペスカトーレ!”と<LINE>
// 叫んでから食すべし(しかも、腹式呼吸で)<END>
Seafood mixed with pasta. When you<LINE>
recieve your plate you're supposed to<LINE>
yell PESCATORE!<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7968)
// 10FDA0
//ペスカトーレ<END>
Pescatore<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C766C)
// 1100D0
// 何をはさんでもサンドイッチ<LINE>
// 確かに・・・・何をはさんでもサンドイッチ<LINE>
// ・・・・何もはさまないと何になる?<END>
What should a sandwich contain.<LINE>
Indeed...What should a sandwich contain?<LINE>
...If it contains nothing what is it?<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7668)
// 110130
// 外側はパサパサでもビタビタでもダメ<LINE>
// あくまで、しっとり!<LINE>
// キュウリ抜きとるべからず<END>
The exterior side cannot be dried out<LINE>
and hard. It has to be a little moist!<LINE>
And the interior must have cucumber.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C75D8)
// 110188
//サンドイッチ<END>
Sandwich<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7964)
#WRITE(ptr, $C824C)
#WRITE(ptr, $C8544)
// 10FDB0
// 何か・・・・危険なニオイがするぜ・・・・<LINE>
// こいつは、まさに食材のケンカ料理だ!<END>
Somehow...it smells dangerous...<LINE>
It must be the ingredients reacting<LINE>
to each other!<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7960)
// 10FDF8
// やわやわアチアチのなめらか豆腐。<LINE>
// ピリ辛あんとのアクセントが絶妙!<END>
Smooth tofu which is hot and sour.<LINE>
Your chinese is perfect without accent.<END>

^ The second line is in my understanding meant as a pun. When you eat something hot & sour and start speaking you sound chinese.

#WRITE(ptr, $C78D0)
// 10FE40
//麻婆豆腐<END>
Hot and Sour Soup<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C78CC)
#WRITE(ptr, $C84AC)
// 10FE50
// コクが足りない・・・・<LINE>
// よけいな雑味が感じられる・・・・<END>
This isn't enough...<LINE>
It's unnecessarily bitter...<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C78C8)
// 10FE80
// スパイスの刺激と、シーフードの持ち味。<LINE>
// 強烈な夏の日差しを浴びながら<LINE>
// 波間に漂う幻想に酔う瞬間・・・・<END>
Spices add into the natural flavor of<LINE>
seafood. When sunbathing in the summer<LINE>
you might get a heatstroke.<END>

^ The second and third lines are weird in this one or I'm just misunderstanding them.

#WRITE(ptr, $C7838)
// 10FEE8
//海鮮カレー<END>
Seafood Curry<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7834)
#WRITE(ptr, $C883C)
// 10FEF8
// ドサドサと盛り付けた微妙なルックス・・・・<LINE>
// 十人のうち三人くらいは食べてくれるかな?<END>
Toss out the not so good looking ones...<LINE>
Will I be able to eat this much?<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7830)
// 10FF48
// みずみずしい野菜を<LINE>
// オリジナルの盛り付けでどうぞ<LINE>
// 絵画を描くように、色と形を構成しましょう<END>
Wash the veggies and use your<LINE>
imagination when arranging them on a<LINE>
plate. Make it a piece of art.<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C77A0)
// 10FFA8
//野菜サラダ<END>
Veggie Salad<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C779C)
// 10FFB8
// あなたは、料理の海を開拓する冒険家<LINE>
// スピリッツがフロンティアすぎて<LINE>
// みんな置き去り!<END>
You're a real cooking pioneer. The<LINE>
spirits are going beyond the frontier.<LINE>
Everybody is leaving!<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7798)
// 110010
// シロップは宇宙・・・・<LINE>
// きらめく星たちのように輝くフルーツ<LINE>
// 見ているだけで夢色気分!<END>
Syrup is the universe...<LINE>
And fruits shine like stars in it.<LINE>
Look at the glamour of it!<END>

#WRITE(ptr, $C7708)
// 110060
//フルーツポンチ<END>
Fruit Punch<END>
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« Reply #10 on: February 08, 2007, 09:47:21 PM »

lol. Those recipes looks really funny, it was a smart idea. Dangerous food... ¬_¬
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« Reply #11 on: February 11, 2007, 09:23:19 AM »

Some suggestions:

#WRITE(ptr, $C753C)
// 110280
可愛らしい女の子が、髪型はちょんまげで<LINE>
ヒラヒラのドレスを着て踊っている・・・・<LINE>
そんなイメージ? ・・・・あれ???<END>
A lovely girl with a topknot<LINE>
arrives in an angel like dress...<LINE>
That kind of image? ...Huh???<END>

A beautiful girl wilth a topknot,<LINE>
dancing in a fluttering dress...<LINE>
Is that the image you get?  Huh?<END>

//This reminds me of one of those artsy commercials where you see an image of a beautiful woman and hear opera music in the background, only to find that they're advertising butter.  Plus, there's a big association with young girls and sweets in Japan, so that's probably where the imagery comes from.

#WRITE(ptr, $C7FE8)
// 10F708
// シャケに染み込むバターの風味が最高!<LINE>
// 互いの味わいを高める味と味<LINE>
// ベストパートナーと称えたい<END>
When you soak salmon into butter it'll<LINE>
taste great. Both of their flavors<LINE>
enhance each others like best partners.<END>

The last part should read more like, "Their flavors should complime